Talk:Li Bai
Author's Note
- I'm really trying to get my sources tight- if you notice anything that you think should have a citation next to it, please tell me so!
- Quality over quantity! I know its rather short: if you think it should be longer just say so.
- I just have to say so myself, I think my topic is hilarious.
Thanks, --ArnoldQ 07:53, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Good Start- it sounds like reading your paper is going to be a lot of fun- totally suitable "voice" for your poet. Be sure to double check you spelling though- right after saying you might be of Turkish descent, you say "My probably" instead of "I". Simple mistake; a good proofreading will take care of that.Dekeo 06:02, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Aclhemist1330
Please talk about your death and horn growing story it was the highlight off your whole presentation and capture the voice of a drunkard in some areas. I really like the lay out and flow make sure you have refences
looking good
You don't have to worry about any of your sources. You were very thorough. I don't think the length of your paper is a problem. Being able to make a concise argument in a short amount of space is a good thing. Still, making the paper longer won't hurt you if you are worried about your grade and are still working on this paper. Name 04:41, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
Comment ?
The sources look fine. Considering yours is solid text and not poem fillers, the length is of no problem. More pictures would be nice though~ --Whatisthis 06:34, 5 March 2012 (UTC)