Talk:Ling Shuhua (1900-1990)
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Very well organized, except the first block. I think you put too much in the Childhood section. I noticed she was born in 1900, yet you included stuff all the way into the 1920's in that section. I would put the stuff from her teenage years on up into a different section. Mingemperor 17:30, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
It looks good, but you have a lot more information in the first section than all the rest. I would just add more to the other sections. And I agree with the comment above.Pips 17:38, 9 October 2012 (UTC)