Talk:Xiao Hong (1911-1942)

It looks good! Do you have any images? Ellafitzgerald 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

yeah, it doesn't look too bad, but kind of lacking on pictures. Did you look on Wiki Commons or Flickr? Mingemperor 17:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

I agree it needs more images but also maybe a little bit more information.Pips 17:41, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--Foot 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Sounds like she was quite a character. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that you really should fix- they call the reader's attention away from the information to focus on the errors instead. Also, which parts were comment from your sources and which were your comments? I had a difficult time trying to figure that out. Dekeo 21:35, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

There was very little content, I understand the struggle to find English sources. It's too bad that her history with men had to be so bad. Random1 02:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)