Talk:Philosophical Discourses

New comments in 2013

Tara, I don't remember you doing a presentation on this topic but one on Confucius...so I posted my comments there. But if you are supposed to do this page as well I would suggest uploading something at least. Your Confucius page was well done. Samantha S (talk) 03:27, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [1]. Good luck with your composition! Best, Root (talk) 13:45, 25 February 2013 (CET)

When I tried to look at it just barely nothing was loading so if you have not put any information up yet a good start would be to do that... A Nonny Mouse (talk) 00:38, 28 February 2013 (CET)

My only problem with this article is its empty.....maybe you have not uploaded it yet. If so, keep up the great work.--Joshua B. (talk) 19:29, 1 March 2013 (CET)