Talk:6th century Literature in the south

Comments for 2013

Matt! The information is interesting. I would suggest adding more information though. The second paragraph particularly felt like a list rather than an actual paragraph so I would suggest using bullet points when you list information that way. Also the article is rather short so I wouls also suggest adding more information so the article is more complete. Samantha S (talk) 00:04, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. A Nonny Mouse (talk) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET)

Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--MerchantThief (talk) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET)

Matt, the information here is great. I would like to see you expound a bit more of the influential people and why they are so important. A bit more detail would be great along with some pictures to help illustrate the story and topic. --Joshua B. (talk) 19:34, 1 March 2013 (CET)