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| + | Dear Mitchell, this is really well elaborated and a lot of personal insights, based on our readings through the semester. The paper is also well structured, I have added some sub headings. Pictures would have been nice though. It would have been good to connect the sources more directly with the paragraphs, but that is a minor issue. Great work! [[User:Root|Root]] 15:37, 6 December 2012 (UTC) | ||
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thank you very informativeWuwei 15:21, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
Dear Mitchell, this is really well elaborated and a lot of personal insights, based on our readings through the semester. The paper is also well structured, I have added some sub headings. Pictures would have been nice though. It would have been good to connect the sources more directly with the paragraphs, but that is a minor issue. Great work! Root 15:37, 6 December 2012 (UTC)