Talk:Self Cultivation

Mitchell, you've been a good classmate this semester, this article is well thought out. Cia1819 11:23, 10 December 2012 (UTC)cia1819

thank you very informativeWuwei 15:21, 6 December 2012 (UTC)

Dear Mitchell, this is really well elaborated and a lot of personal insights, based on our readings through the semester. The paper is also well structured, I have added some sub headings. Pictures would have been nice though. It would have been good to connect the sources more directly with the paragraphs, but that is a minor issue. Great work! Root 15:37, 6 December 2012 (UTC)